Make some wording snappier/less verbose.

diff --git a/community/index.html b/community/index.html
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--- a/community/index.html
+++ b/community/index.html
@@ -12,13 +12,14 @@
          <header><h2>Community<h2></header>
          <div class="entry-content">
            <p>
-           OpenSSL is a global open source project that has a
+            OpenSSL source is maintained by a
+            <a href="committers.html">team of committers</a>.
+            The overall project is run by the
+            <a href="omc.html">OpenSSL Management Committee</a>
+            We operate under a set of
+            <a href="/policies/bylaws.html">project bylaws</a>
+            and ask everyone to follow our
             <a href="conduct.html">code of conduct</a>.
-            It is run by the
-            <a href="omc.html">OpenSSL Management Committee</a> and the
-            source is maintained by a
-            <a href="committers.html">team of committers</a>, as defined
-            in the <a href="/policies/bylaws.html">project bylaws</a>.
             </p>
 
             <p>Here are some of the ways you can join the community and

diff --git a/community/sidebar.shtml b/community/sidebar.shtml
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--- a/community/sidebar.shtml
+++ b/community/sidebar.shtml
@@ -4,16 +4,16 @@
     <h1><a href=".">Community</a></h1>
     <ul>
       <li>
-         <a href="conduct.html">Code of Conduct</a>
+         <a href="committers.html">List of Committers</a>
       </li>
       <li>
          <a href="omc.html">OpenSSL Management Committee</a>
       </li>
       <li>
-         <a href="committers.html">List of Committers</a>
+         <a href="conduct.html">Code of Conduct</a>
       </li>
       <li>
-         <a href="contacts.html">Contact Us</a>
+         <a href="contacts.html">Postal Addresses</a>
       </li>
       <li>
          <a href="getting-started.html">Getting Started as a Contributor</a>

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
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--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
        <header><h2>Welcome to OpenSSL!</h2></header>
        <div class="entry-content">
          <p>
-          OpenSSL is an open source project that provides a
+          OpenSSL is a
          robust, commercial-grade, and full-featured toolkit
          for the Transport Layer Security (TLS) and Secure
          Sockets Layer (SSL) protocols. It is also a general-purpose
@@ -25,12 +25,17 @@
          </p>
 
          <p>
-         The OpenSSL toolkit is licensed under an Apache-style license,
+         OpenSSL is licensed under an Apache-style license,
          which basically means that you are free to get and use it for
          commercial and non-commercial purposes subject to some simple
          license conditions.
          </p>
 
+          <p>For a list of vulnerabilities, and the releases in
+          which they were found and fixes, see our
+          <a href="news/vulnerabilities.html">Vulnerabilities</a> page.
+          </p>
+
          <h3>Latest News</h3>
          <table class="newsflash" width="90%">
            <!--#include virtual="newsflash.inc"-->

diff --git a/news/index.html b/news/index.html
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--- a/news/index.html
+++ b/news/index.html
@@ -14,6 +14,7 @@
            <p>
            To get the latest source, see the
            <a href="/source">Downloads</a> section.
+            This also lists the latest release of each version.
            For an exhaustive list of all releases (and some other
            announcements), see the <a href="newslog.html">Newslog</a>
            page.

diff --git a/policies/index.html b/policies/index.html
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--- a/policies/index.html
+++ b/policies/index.html
@@ -51,9 +51,7 @@
            <p>
             The OpenSSL project is managed by the OpenSSL Management Committee
             (OMC), as defined by the <a href="bylaws.html">project bylaws</a>.
-            </p>
-            <p>
-            The OpenSSL project is
+            It is
             represented in legal and most official formal capacities by the
             OpenSSL Software Foundation, a Delaware (US) non-profit corporation
             which has its own <a href="osf-bylaws.pdf">bylaws</a> as a legal

diff --git a/source/index.html b/source/index.html
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--- a/source/index.html
+++ b/source/index.html
@@ -11,11 +11,13 @@
        <article>
          <header><h2>Downloads</h2></header>
          <div class="entry-content">
-           <p>Our development is maintained in a
+           <p>The master sources are maintained in our
            <a href="gitrepo.html">git repository</a>, which is
            accessible over the network and cloned on GitHub,
             at <a
               href="https://github.com/openssl/openssl">https://github.com/openssl/openssl</a>.
+            Bugs and pull patches (issues and pull requests) should be
+            file on the GitHub repo.
            Please familiarize yourself with the
            <a href="license.html">license</a>.
            </p>
@@ -28,10 +30,10 @@
            A list of mirror sites can be found <a href="mirror.html">here</a>.
            </p>
 
-           <p><em>Note:</em> The latest stable version is the 1.1.0 series of
-           releases. Also available is the 1.0.2 series. This is also our Long Term
-           Support (LTS) version (support will be provided until 31st December
-           2019). The 0.9.8, 1.0.0 and 1.0.1 versions are now out of support and
+           <p><em>Note:</em> The latest stable version is the 1.1.0 series.
+            The 1.0.2 series is our Long Term
+           Support (LTS) release, supported until 31st December 2019.
+            The 0.9.8, 1.0.0 and 1.0.1 versions are now out of support and
            should not be used.</p>
 
            <table>
@@ -46,7 +48,7 @@
 
            <p>When building a release for the first time, please make sure
            to look at the README and INSTALL files in the distribution.
-           If you have problems, look at the FAQ, which can also be
+           If you have problems, look at the FAQ, which can be
            found <a href="/docs/faq.html">online</a>.</p>
 
            <p>PGP keys for the signatures are available from the

diff --git a/support/index.html b/support/index.html
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--- a/support/index.html
+++ b/support/index.html
@@ -9,16 +9,15 @@
        <article>
          <header><h2>Commercial Support</h2></header>
          <div class="entry-content">
-           <p>OpenSSL is a a collaborative effort of a worldwide
-           <a href="/community">community</a> of volunteers. We are always
-           grateful to receive support for the project.</p>
-
-           <p>In addition to joining the community, you can make a
+           <p>In addition to joining the
+           <a href="/community">community,</a>
+            you can make a
            direct <a href="donations.html">donation</a>
            to the project. Your contribution will help fund members of our
-           development team.  Significant sponsors have a say in the future
-           direction of OpenSSL as well as acknowledgements and logo
-           placements.  We would like to take this opportunity to
+           development team.  Significant sponsors can pay for particular
+            work of interest to them, as well as being acknowledged on our
+            website.
+           We would like to take this opportunity to
            <a href="acks.html">acknowledge</a> those who have provided
            financial support.</p>